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Endelva
Oct 21, 2007 8:35:28 GMT -5
Post by pixiemagic on Oct 21, 2007 8:35:28 GMT -5
General Information
Name:Endelva
Alias/Nickname: Delva
Race:Elve
Class: Ranger
Alignment: True Neutral
Age:43 year old in elf years
Appearance: She has light purple hair, with teal eyes. She wear purple lipstick that matches her hair, and has a very light purple eye shadow. Her hair is long it past her back a little. She wears this head band thing that has a jewel in the middle of it. She have pointy ears. She wears this longish blue dress that has a jewel in the center of it up at the top of it, but in the center.
Max HP:20/20
Max MP:0
History: When she was little something bad happen. Her memory was erase, yet she is only remembering what she think had happen.
Goals/Aspirations: To die in peace
Roleplaying Stats(Distribute 15 points amongst these 5 RP stats. No category can have an amount higher than 6 assigned to it, except for wealth)
Attack:3 Defense:4 Agility:5 Burst:3 Wealth:0
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Endelva
Oct 21, 2007 16:49:15 GMT -5
Post by Oswin on Oct 21, 2007 16:49:15 GMT -5
Hmm, there's things that could be changed. Like, does she really have to be 14? There seems to be alot of young characters here. And why can't she remember anything from her past? At least explain why...
Also. your wealth is wrong. If your Attack is 3, Defense 4, Agility 4, and Burst 3, that counts up to a total of 15. That would mean your wealth is zero.
So try to expand it a little more, then I'll accept it.
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Endelva
Oct 22, 2007 1:09:14 GMT -5
Post by pixiemagic on Oct 22, 2007 1:09:14 GMT -5
I fix it
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Endelva
Oct 22, 2007 1:27:00 GMT -5
Post by Oswin on Oct 22, 2007 1:27:00 GMT -5
Okay, accepted.
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Endelva
Jan 1, 2008 17:18:28 GMT -5
Post by Altaiir on Jan 1, 2008 17:18:28 GMT -5
Oops. I guess now we know who "pixiemagic" is.
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